The Stallion

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by dream lady (move over school!) on Wednesday, 21-Mar-2007 5:41:51

He runs, ever elusive his breath like hot fire,
He rests alone on a ridge,
Grazes from wild grasses,
He is known only to himself,
A wild thing, a free spirit,
He is a mystery,
A metaphore of something else,
Sometimes disconcerting,
Simplicity not his way,
A rare thing of beauty,
His hoofs a tangle mass of nerves and steel,
His muscles rippling under tawny skin,
Who is he, this beast of wonder,
He is almost a lost breed,
Part animal part legend,
Never caught, never confined,
Though some have tried to capture him,
He can never be tamed,
For he is the stallion
A survivor of modern age,
Still someday being yesterday's child.,

Post 2 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Wednesday, 21-Mar-2007 9:08:32

I knew a stallion like that and his colt is a cracker.

Post 3 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Wednesday, 21-Mar-2007 10:14:03

Very good, thanks.

I especially like the "part animal, part legend." Oh so true.

Bob

Post 4 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Wednesday, 21-Mar-2007 10:25:54

Kauto Star

Post 5 by Siriusly Severus (The ESTJ 1w9 3w4 6w7 The Taskmaste) on Wednesday, 06-Feb-2008 3:00:46

Beautifully written!